Vol 9. No 1. (Fall 2026)
Elisabeth van Stam is a Writing Advisor on the Graduate and Postdoctoral team and STEM Resource at the University of Waterloo’s Writing and Communication Centre (WCC). Trained as a professional biologist, she brings extensive experience conducting and communicating scientific research to her work supporting writers and colleagues at the WCC. Her pedagogical approach is student‑centered and genre‑aware, drawing on firsthand STEM writing experience to foreground global structure and meaning‑making while positioning students as experts in their disciplinary knowledge and communication goals.
Have you ever heard or given the advice to write an introduction section of a research report last? For experienced STEM writers, this is often a reasonable strategy. However, I would argue that for developing STEM experts (undergraduate students) and novice STEM researchers (graduate students), this advice is often counterproductive and that we should be careful about giving it when supporting students in the post-secondary writing centre. This is because, while undergraduate and graduate students engage with research in different ways, both groups are still learning how disciplinary knowledge is constructed, communicated, and justified through STEM academic writing.
Writing an introduction last is not inherently wrong, nor is it necessarily bad advice. However, for novice STEM writers, writing the introduction last can postpone critical engagement with their research topic. Why does the research matter? How does the research extend existing knowledge? How are research questions or objectives shaped by the answers to these questions? These are the questions that STEM research report introductions are designed to answer. In doing so, introductions establish the context of a research topic, articulate the motivations for a study, and define the objectives that drive it (Lim, 2012; Pun & Cheung, 2023; Swales, 1990).
Consequently, when novice STEM writers do not engage with these questions before drafting their research reports, they postpone the essential rhetorical work that shapes both how research is designed and communicated (Drake & Han, 2025) as well as how readers evaluate its relevance and strength (Armağan, 2019). That is, without carefully considering what information belongs in their introductions and why, novice STEM writers often struggle to develop a coherent narrative that establishes the study’s motivations and objectives. These motivations and objectives, in turn, guide the remainder of the research report (Armağan, 2019). Similar to writing an argumentative essay without a clear thesis, delaying the rhetorical work of establishing a study’s motivations and objectives often affects sections beyond the introduction itself. Without this underlying logic to guide decision-making, novice STEM writers may struggle to determine what information belongs in their Methods, Results, and Discussion sections and why, resulting in writing that is unfocused, incomplete, or misaligned with the report’s intended purpose (Armağan, 2019; Day, 1998; Drake & Han, 2025; Jirge, 2017; Tavakol & O’Brien, 2023). In other words, introductions do not simply present research; they help shape it.
When Research and Writing Become Disconnected
So why do so many STEM students struggle with writing introductions? I suspect part of the answer lies in how STEM students often conceptualize research itself. For many STEM students, research is understood primarily as experimentation: designing methods, collecting data, and analyzing results. Within this framework, writing becomes something that happens after the “real” research is complete. Consequently, introductions are often viewed as explanations of completed work rather than as an important component of the research process itself. However, the problem with this view is that it reduces the introduction to a record of what was done rather than an explanation of why the study was worth doing in the first place.
However, the challenge is not simply that STEM students frequently view research as experimentation. In many STEM contexts, students can successfully participate in “research” while remaining largely disconnected from the process through which research questions are formulated and justified. This is particularly true when students are conducting structured laboratory exercises as part of their coursework, working on projects whose research direction has already been defined by a supervisor, or participating in data mining — an often criticized but surprisingly common practice of collecting data first and determining how to use it later. In these situations, students can participate in research activities, generate results, and even complete substantial portions of a project before they are required to articulate the rationale for the study or its contribution to existing knowledge.
These misconceptions about the research process can help explain why many STEM students view introductions as something that can be postponed until the end of a study—and why they often struggle to write them when they finally reach that stage. However, they do not explain why writing instructors and experienced STEM researchers so often recommend this strategy.
For readers familiar with humanities research, the relationship between inquiry and writing is likely self-evident. As a result, it is unsurprising that writing instructors with this academic background might recommend writing an introduction last. From their perspective, the rhetorical work of motivating and justifying a study should already be complete if the empirical work underlying that study is complete.
A similar assumption can emerge among experienced STEM researchers. Through years of participating in disciplinary research, they have internalized the process of determining why a study matters, what need it addresses, and what it seeks to accomplish in response. For them, this work is often so deeply embedded within the research process that it no longer requires significant conscious attention. Consequently, it can be easy to overlook the extent to which novice STEM researchers are still learning to engage with these questions and how important that work is to conceptualizing and communicating their research.
However, neither of these perspectives necessarily applies to novice STEM researchers, who are still developing their academic identities, building disciplinary knowledge, and learning research practices within their fields of study. Consequently, when they write their introductions last, they are not simply postponing the writing of an introduction. They are postponing the intellectual and rhetorical work of determining why a study matters, what it seeks to accomplish, and how those decisions should shape the rest of the research report.
Why This Matters in the Writing Centre
Because introductions establish the logic that guides the remainder of a STEM research report, it is critical that writing centre practitioners understand how these introductions function rhetorically. Doing so allows us to interpret student writing more accurately and provide feedback that helps STEM writers determine what information is relevant, how it contributes to the introduction’s purpose, and how it should be articulated to establish rhetorical value and a coherent narrative—even when we do not share the writer’s disciplinary expertise. This understanding is important when working with undergraduate (UG) writers, who are developing an understanding of how introductions frame disciplinary learning (Hajan et al., 2024; Parkinson, 2017). It is equally important when working with graduate writers, who must position their work within ongoing scholarly conversations in ways that demonstrate both their research significance and credibility as researchers (Carter, 2016; Martín & León Pérez, 2014). In both cases, effective writing support requires more than attention to sentence-level clarity or refining individual claims; it requires understanding how STEM disciplinary expectations shape the rhetorical work of an introduction, particularly how STEM disciplinary inquiry is motivated and how its objectives are articulated within a given context.
What a STEM Introduction Actually Does
In a STEM research report, the introduction does far more than provide background or ease the reader into a topic. It performs essential rhetorical work by introducing a disciplinary topic, establishing the motivations for a study, and articulating clear research objectives (Drake & Han, 2025; Pun & Cheung, 2023; Swales, 1990, 2004; Swales & Feak, 2004; Tavakol & O’Brien, 2023). Specifically, the introduction serves two essential functions:
• It articulates research motivations by explaining why the research is necessary and situating the study within an existing body of disciplinary knowledge—that is, within an ongoing scholarly conversation (Carter, 2016; Day, 1998; Martín & León Pérez, 2014; Swales, 1990; Swales & Feak, 2004). These motivations are not simply contextual; in STEM writing how a research problem is motivated directly shapes what research questions can be asked, how narrowly or broadly these questions can be framed, as well as what research investigations are appropriate (Armağan, 2019; Codina, 2022; Day, 1998; Gustavii, 2017; Hanna, 2019; Jirge, 2017; Swales & Feak, 2004).
•It articulates the research objectives or goals by clearly specifying what the report sets out to accomplish in response to the motivated problem (Pun & Cheung, 2023; Swales, 1990; Swales & Feak, 2004; Tavakol & O’Brien, 2023). Where research motivations determine what questions can be asked, the research objectives shape how those questions are investigated and answered—guiding the selection of methods, the relevance of results, and their interpretation in the discussion (Codina, 2022; Day, 1998; Gustavii, 2017; Hajan et al., 2024; Hanna, 2019).
Taken together, these functions highlight that the introduction is not just a formality to get through before the “real” content begins, but a section that establishes the logic governing the entire research report. The introduction determines not only what content should be included, but also how that content should be framed (by the writer) and interpreted (by the reader) (Codina, 2022; Day, 1998; Swales, 1990, 2004).
However, understanding that introductions establish research motivations and objectives is only part of what is required to effectively support STEM writers. As writing centre practitioners, we also need ways to identify how the rhetorical work of a STEM research report introduction is realized in practice and how its various elements establish the logic that guides the remainder of the research report.
Conclusion
Throughout this post, I have argued that STEM research report introductions do far more than provide background information. They establish the significance of a research topic, motivate the need for a study, and articulate the objectives that guide the remainder of the research report. As a result, introductions help shape both how research is communicated and how it is understood.
For writing centre practitioners, however, understanding the purpose of an introduction is only part of the challenge. We also need ways to recognize how this rhetorical work is accomplished in practice, particularly when it is still being developed by novice STEM researchers. In other words, we need ways to make this rhetorical work visible to students who are still learning it and to writing centre practitioners who help them articulate it.
This is exactly where the CaRS model becomes useful. In my next post, I explore the CaRS model and examine how it helps make the rhetorical work of STEM introductions more explicit, providing writing centre practitioners with a practical framework for interpreting student writing and discussing introductions in terms of purpose, motivation, and objectives rather than as a rigid template or checklist for constructing introductions.
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